I had a great Saturday last week. I got up at eight in the morning. After breakfast, I did my homework. And then I went to my grandmas house to have lunch. In the afternoon, I went to swim with my friends. We had a good time together. In the evening, I watched TV with my parents. I was happy to spend my Saturday with my family and friends. What a great day!
五(2)班 高恩博
指导老师点评:
小作者們都很有想法,从不同角度描述了自己周六的活动:史辰睿着重介绍自己周六在博物馆的经历,充分体验科学的乐趣;
张语桐选取自己周六的主要活动,表达自己对绘画的热爱;
王沐祺则按照时间顺序记录周六的活动,结构严谨,条理清晰。这三位同学都用到了often、usually等频率副词。高恩博则另辟蹊径,选用过去时,从早、中、晚三个时间段介绍了自己上周六的日程。
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